The Kelpies warning

Incase you cannot read that it says:

The Kelpie

Midnight black
and deepest Jade,
this in the darkened waters wade.

Fire built
Many camps made,
now, far too near it banks me stayed.

Illusion
Kindness displayed,
to this these are just games it played.

Handsom lad
or steed portrayed
into its dark abyss it bade.

comsumed all
except on maid
who once with this forever stayed.

Hopeless cries
there is no aid,
for nothing would it ever trade.

Brave attack
a swift crusade,
but still this too it can evade.

Conquer it
not with the blade
but with a bridle - gold inlade.

This is the Kelpie's warning from my story Song of teh Siren. I actually wrote this years adn years ago, but I still love it. It is the only poem have ever written (or plan to because i hate poetry but none the less XD



ah and for the background! Credit goes to these marvelous photographers!

The horse (in this case Kelpie)
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and the River:
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EDIT:

You probably already noticed.. I screwed up my own poem darn it!

It is supposed to say : Kindness Displayed not Kindness portrayed, and the next satanza is spelled wrong darn it all. That and when I went to fix it I realized that The version with the words on it didn't even save Oh well I'll fix it later XD